Great story Sekope. Just one thing - if your story is happening now, please use the present tense, for example: the rabbit runs, turns, sees, etc. If your story happened in the past, please use the past tense: the rabbit turned, noticed, stopped, etc. I wonder why the big black rabbit disappeared? Why? What happened to the shadow? Well done for working on your tasks Sekope!
Well done Sekope. Remember to read your story again after you have done writing, so that you can check your punctuation. Great effort Sekope, keep it up.
Great story Sekope. Just one thing - if your story is happening now, please use the present tense, for example: the rabbit runs, turns, sees, etc. If your story happened in the past, please use the past tense: the rabbit turned, noticed, stopped, etc.
ReplyDeleteI wonder why the big black rabbit disappeared? Why? What happened to the shadow? Well done for working on your tasks Sekope!
Well done Sekope. Remember to read your story again after you have done writing, so that you can check your punctuation. Great effort Sekope, keep it up.
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